Liked it a lot. Especially the last line. _

Oh my gosh! I loved this. I love your stlye of writing and depth of emotions behind it.

Yay! I'm reviewing another of your poems! I just wanted to make the 1 a 2. Is the poem something about how bad these days are or something? Like how violent, how polluted, how congested...? If so, I really like it. I don't understand why more people don't review your things...

I like the repetition. I think there's a style you might like.

Wikipedia the "Paradelle".

The repetition of this poem would work nicely in the six syllables per line, six lines per stanza scheme. And I think you might enjoy it, especially re-formatting this poem.

The second, "how to breath". *breathe.

"How to swim when the masses are drowning you." That's a great figure of speech. I like the simplicity and sincerity of the words: "How to breathe when the air is not clean.." These are powerful words.

Perfect length, nice formatting and line breaks.

Nice piece you have here, Miss Maxwell.

very spiffy use of repitition. Adds a lot to the poem. Which is rare for me, I generaly don't like repitition too much, but you used it well. Good job.