Reviews for HIM
a monday survivor chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Is that the end? Or the start of your book? E-mail with your anwser please. Me, being the very helpful me, will now point out all you typos in hope you will fix them.


I had driven the full twenty four minutes like the internet directions said, and I came in and wished momma* goodnight and love for her dreams.(Names are upercased)

Little after Middle

This made me like him even more, the fact thathe* was testing us to see if we hated him.(Space, and I'm guessing italics)

Little after Middle

As the sounds of aliens abducting the highway as the rigs roll by my window, I must conclude that he is taking me under, andhe* hypnotized me somehow with his being.(Space, and I'm guessing italics)

Little after Middle I want my novel to be shed*.(Shred)

EndBut I was crying; I was crying*.(It would make more scence if you took out that secound "I was crying")
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
kind of sad and depressing, but very well written