|Reviews for Semantic Zen|
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
I thought this was really well written, though perhaps a bit much? You had a lot of stanzas, all of them chock full of ideas and structures to wade through. It might work more effectively if you shortened it a bit? If you just brought out the main points and made them a bit more prominent maybe? Maybe what I'm saying here is just me being stupid. I did like it a lot though. Nice work.