|Reviews for The Unhappiness Factor|
| Fobbster chapter 5 . 5/23/2015
Love how you managed to slip George Orwell into there.
Slightly frightening, but I had an art teacher called Christina Lovecek.
She was the most sour person I've ever met.
Love your username. Who Tortoise?
| Ibbonray chapter 36 . 5/17/2014
Words cannot explain the impact this has had on me.
If you haven't officially published this, I request that you do.
| Kaizen Kitty chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
XD Reading this in 2013...eventually reality catches up to fiction...
Funny prologue, really catchy (especially the immediacy of the dates and exaggerated history of the story world).
| tenna shut up chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
THIS IS ONE TERRIFYING PROLOGUE. hahahaha it is though
| Anon chapter 5 . 12/18/2011
This story's like amateur Orwell on mass amounts of anti-depressants.
| Earthling Queen chapter 36 . 3/9/2011
1984 inspires us all. I love big brother.
| ReadermLOl chapter 13 . 2/15/2011
Haha, I love this story sad to think that the world mogh actually turn out like this/
| Daddylonglegs chapter 35 . 11/4/2010
I READ THE LAST FEW LINES LITERALLY SLACK JAWED.
Kinda happy that Sara escaped but OMG. I WAS EXPECTING A LOT OF THINGS BUT I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT.
| thelemalemur chapter 5 . 11/1/2010
PLEASE say it's not a coincedence that one of the character's name is Andrea Levy? She is one of my FAVOURITE authors.
| thelemalemur chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Haha. Trying to get through revision by learning some of my revision cards and then coming here to read a chapter .. Already looks interesting! I've always wanted to write something about the potential oppressiveness of religion but am not very good at writing in the future, however close or distant, so this should be interesting!
| Natarii chapter 36 . 8/3/2010
I must say I enjoyed the ending. Very satisfactory. Though, I did wish to see a bit more of the Shepherd throughout, but overall the story was great (even if i did feel annoyed about feeling annoyed most of the time with them incorrigible trainers). Also, I sort of feel that the ending was rushed in a sense. Maybe I'm just being greedy for more after-program experiences. Whatever, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of work. *smiles*
| antique angels chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
That sounds like a horrid country. I would be sent to an NSD camp? They'd have to catch me first! I'd take my lesbian ass over to another country. ESCAPE TO FREEDOM! XD
| angel-Janna chapter 36 . 4/17/2010
Oh my God. Get this published- it's better than Orwell! Sure as hell I'll be buying a copy :( (PS: the smiley to the left of this is actually happy, but in deference to Sara I've stuck it upside down. Unhappiness Prevails!)
Please write more!
| Eleanor J. Cinders chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
I. freaking. love this. I'm just curious now as to how Sara became this way? Wouldn't a person who grew up in such a society be I don't know...indoctrinated? This is exciting. So exciting. Oh, I loved her attempts a note, btw. "YOU ALL SUCK." That would probably be my note too.
| Sakka-Fenikkusu chapter 36 . 10/23/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY. :D