Reviews for this fog: illusive
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
oh man. this is incredible. i think i just fell in love with your writing.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Rich and varied.
destinee ariarti chapter 1 . 10/18/2005

style is so interesting, and the words are even more so

I do believe you're going on my favorite authors list, because I can tell already that the rest of your work is bound to be this amazing
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I love this, awesome work!
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Wow. Just amazing. Favorites!
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
.Amazing,but a bit too raw.
in tesseraction chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
deliciously graphic and passionate. i love.
Abortive Measures chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Wow, I've never read anything like that before, even from a published poet...
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
disjointed but SO sexy.

lovelovelove the second stanza/paraghraph. just left me shivering and hanging all at once.

~* noelle
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I just wish I knew where you got your inspiration from, because this is amazing.
Ayva chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
i especially liked the paragraph about choosing the gun over him
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
You make Dark Beautiful. Truly wonderful.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
'& there's only/This Mystical Fog' made it quite personal somehow, as if you were actually saying it, rather than I was reading it.
lackluster chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
god, you're a genius. that's just it, no other possible explanaition.
euphemismsforlukewarmtragedies chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
this was just breathtaking.i am envious. i wish i wrote it.

it's disjointed but blatant at the same time...i love what you state in the parenthesis.

well done.
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