Reviews for The Hypocrite's Smile
LadyFalcone chapter 15 . 7/5/2006
That is so wrong, making Andrew die like that, I demand you to write a story about him and how after death he bacame a ghost and somehow finds Di and all that gushy 'happy' stuff.
bR0k3N chapter 11 . 6/22/2006
o0o0o some sappy gay love! awe!
bR0k3N chapter 10 . 6/22/2006
omg! poor elizabeth... talkin about a twist in the story!
bR0k3N chapter 7 . 6/22/2006
heehee!
bR0k3N chapter 6 . 6/22/2006
i dunt think i found spelling errors... lol this is great so far... heehee!
bR0k3N chapter 5 . 6/22/2006
hehhe! o0o0 oI LOVE ANDREW ALREADY! haha
bR0k3N chapter 4 . 6/22/2006
oh shit!
bR0k3N chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
o0o yeah.. keagan sounds righteous... lol
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
I loved this so far... and wow... wonder where he can get a girlfriend...? hehee!
Yoyo-chan chapter 15 . 6/2/2006
It's kind of annoying after reading a sad ending to be told in the authors notes that it should have made us cry. Just fyi.
KageNeko chapter 15 . 6/1/2006
Aw ;.; its so cute..yet sad, yet good its like a giant milkshake, all the different elements you used to make it. Overall it was very yummy ...i mean good... good job
Green Eyes chapter 15 . 4/25/2006
whywhywhhwhywhywhy wpould you do that to us! I just read the whole thing- it was so good, but thought it would have a HAPPY ending- i guess there was a bit of hope- but just why :( he was your favourite character as well!ok, just a few hints n grammar etc- (sorry if other people have already told you)It is awlays 'I'd HAVE done that', not 'I'd OF done that'. And there were a couple of mix ups with 'off' and 'of'- but you did say you were doing it in a rush and i thought the story was brilliant anyway :) Its just crazy- i found you through the search engine and saw your list of fictions- i cannot believe you've written over eighty stories- that is UNBELIEVABLE! I'm so luck with the rest!
Love Eternally chapter 15 . 3/22/2006
Why Andrew, he was awesome. Now I'm going to cry. Nice story though, Keagan's cool
Jaque Dark chapter 15 . 2/18/2006
OMG! I'm sitting here crying. That was so sad! I will never understand why there is cruelty like that in the world. I realise and accept that there is cruelty I just don't know why. Most people would probably think that parents would never do that to their children but they do. How could she as a mother be so cold and cruel? She practically murdered two of her three children! I've been crying since I read the last part of your story. It was truly powerful and moving
Electroqute chapter 15 . 2/5/2006
I thought it was a great ending, so don't beat yourself up about it, lol
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