|Reviews for Faults|
| Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Oh god another poem that feels like it's about me!"We decided to sleep on it,though I didn’t actually go to bed" that made me laugh because its just so obviously true . Nobody actually does sleep on it cos they gotta choose something. It's fantastically insightful. brava
| hey maria chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Wow. This poem is so simple but complex at the same time. I can feel all the different layers to it...and that last verse was very powerful. Wonderful job.