Reviews for All that Glitters
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I really like this. It has a lovely lit to it, like a song, and you used repetitiveness in a very good way. "Every rose has a missing petal/Every love has its hate" - so weel timed. Great work!
cloud-shadows chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I like the theme of this poem a lot, and, of course, you worded it wonderfully.

kloud
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
the last lines are much too true good work

keep writing!