|Reviews for Marlboros and Mandy|
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
whoa, mad crazy awesome poem here, muchly love the traces of mountain dew and the third poison of the day comment...though i have no clue what a oolagah is, pretty sweet word though, anywayz, muchly excellent
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
I liked it a lot, but I didn't completely understand the last three lines. Good work, though.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
| Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I just ran out of comments to make anymore. So I'll say, here's a very good poem.
| rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
this is beautiful stuff, the rythm the shape and flow of the piece, amazing...