Reviews for Glass chips made of Moonshine
ethereal.branches chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I love it. It reflect the reals thoughts of an individual and leaves a lasting impression.
in theory chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I love the 'lasting' feel you give to the word itself by dragging it over two lines. Nicely done.
classic violet chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Beautiful. So amazing. Keep writing. I love your work!
GeorgeBailey chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Hey

I think this is interesting. The first few lines are quite captivating. But I think it strays into something else after that. It doesn't feel connected. Maybe it's not supposed to, but I think that you distance yourself from the car subject for too long. Regardless, these are powerful images.

George
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
have felt this. really, the poem is just so sincere. I love the ending, how emotionally strong and gripping your words are. it is just so beautiful.

* noelle
Pure Autumn chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I love the lines "I can hear his laughter like lullabies" Your imaginative description just blows me away
naughtgreen chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
"forties style lovelast...ingforeveror however longit stayed dark outside."

Because no one else is there and no one can see you. Things feel so much more different at night.
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