|Reviews for Black and Red Fire|
| Driderqueen chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Yes, this is a very awesome and deep poem! I love it! I like the beginning, it had a lot of needed description.
u know what's weird...my name is Sarah too. but im 15 and i live in New York...lol
| angelcloudsh chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
beautiful imagery...my name is sarah too... heehee
| likes to headbang chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
wow... that's amazing.. beautiful imagery... and i'm really sorry this review is late... i read this through once before but i didn't get it so i just went to sleep ;; but it really is amazing... and it IS funny how the day seems to be so long while you're going through it... and then at night everything familiar becomes nightmarish... gosh... anyways great job and happy new years and OMG u live in ENGLAND!
| Autumn's Soundtrack chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Great imagery :]
| Nicole Michele chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I personally didn't care for this one all that much. You used great imagery but I felt like it dragged on.I did like the area where you described night however...I love the lines:A light so bright it cannot se seen
And a darkness so black it is bright
Keep writitng you have talent, this just wasn't a piece that caught MY attention through I'm sure because you write with beauty and talent someone out there loves it!*Nicole*
| thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
beautiful & dreamy
| Gravityx chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
You really are talented. I love how you vividly describe the view, so much that I feel as though I am there. It really is beautiful. Keep writing!
| Sarah Rizal chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Black and Red Fire
| unsocialblyextrovertal chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
I dont know what to say its amasing! ah I used to think I knew how to write read poetry, but lately ive been slacking of on interest, but this is awesome stuff I cant find the words to say, like one huge writer's block(reviewers in this case!) hehe! keep writing! D
| renru-no-ren chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
hm. I like it. It makes me feel kinda...dreamy... still not sure why, though...hm
| SSSSS chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Great poem. I can see it all in my head. That's what matters most of all a poem like this one. Anyways, good job, and hope to see some more stuff.