Reviews for Transparent or Fluorescent?
SuzunaJaganashi chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
How do you do that? You can make the most beautiful images with so few words. Amazing imagery.
The Watched chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Wow. Short, but so true. Beautiful. I loved it.
Unready chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
interesting idea, wonderful execution. Perfect.
ThatGirlInBlack chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Kitsuna chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
A very unique view in this a simple phrase at first glance but really there's a much deeper meaning to it. The formatting isn't bad, in my opinion it would be more appealing if the last two lines were in different postions then the top one. So that it would emphasize the meaning even more in the poem. You made this poem to where it can be interpreted in many ways to whoever is reading it. I like this alot, one of those short but much so impacting poems.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Oohh- interesting idea. I love it.