I like Levi the most... becaus he is the only character that you have done a "good ammount" of "building" with... My second is Dolly... but u have not really showed who he is( or any of the characters really...cept levi...)I like it and i read on...~SS

cute

Aw poor Dolly He's so cute, I just want to squeeze him. Just the way he acts and his mannerisms.

"He looked different with no makeup. Purer, more innocent. More like himself." Aw, could that boy be any more beautifully broken? I adore him so much. "letting his eyes say what he could not; that more than anything in the entire world he wanted me to save him, and there was no doubt in his mind that I could." Their relationship is so... I don't know... you've created a work of art here, honey. I'm so so so happy he's going to be taken care of. My heart is literally bleeding for the poor baby. Write more soon, I can't wait to see him smile again.

OMG! I hate yu! You stopped writeing this! not kewl, first you drive me insane till i read it then yu stop writeing it pft! Keep going and bring Ricki, he's kewl!

MUAH

Meg!

Yay! I'm so happy! But so sad. :( Dolly is so unbearably adorable. He really is just like a little doll. I love him so much it breaks my heart! " He clutched at them with surprising strength, as if I was his only lifeline. I realized with a jolt that I probably was." That is SO adorable. And poor poor Dolly! Bulemia? Oh dear dear. And cutting? Oh no no no! Poor baby! I hope Levi KILLS that bastard. What a tearjerking ending... sniff. Beautiful work, I hope Dolly gets better soon. Update! _

Aw! I can't believe what he's been doing to himself! That poor thing...and the asshole who made him feel that way deserves to be maimed, broken, and bloodied...death only would bring relief. So we can't kill him. Just torture the heck out him!

OMFG. That's so sad. :'(

Ricki and the Lae chik should date! and the 2 of them *Levi and Lae* should go to Dolly's and Riks cottage just the 4 of em... and yes there should be a lemon in here sumwhere!

yea this is pretty insignificant...but im pretty sure its just My Last Breath...without the Holding...i...i have the cd and thats what mine says...

Oh poor poor poor Dolly! That's AWFUL! I don't know what to say to that. :(

Answers to your questions:

YES!

No, still Dolly.

Dolly and... me. (I don't know, lol. I like what you have.)

He's slightly whiney... but I think it's hot.

THE STORY! Lol, kisses involving Dolly. He kisses like a dream.

Uh... I have no clue. Because you wrote it that way.

YES!

YES.

M, yes.

Very much yes.

Yup.

Yup, lots.

I dunno.

Anyway. Update. :P (Hope I was helpful, lol.)

YAY! Good chapterfulness! D

Do you like Dolly’s POV? yus

Do you have a new favorite character? Umm well...no, I always have like Dolly D

If you could see ANY pairings with ANY of the characters, what would they be? Err I don't remember all of the characters! D lol

Is Dolly too whiney or does he pull off troubled? I dunno D I loves him!

What would you like to see more of? More of Dolly and Levi being all yayI'minlove-ish... know what I mean? xD

Why do you think Levi and Dolly’s families were at the school? Because they gotted hurt. Duh.

Should there be Levi beating the shit out of Dolly’s abusive ex in here somewhere? Hell yes. D His ex should come back and try to rape him or whatever and then Levi will come and save the day in a Superman outfit. xD

Should I stick a lemon in here somewhere? Yes. If you make a sex scene, use lemons. xD

Should it be a descriptive lemon? Yes yes. OH WAIT! Do you mean a lemon as in a crappy car? lmao...anyways...xD

Will you be able to live with half of the coming-up story being in Dolly’s POV? Yuss. D He's fun.

Do you like Ricki? (I do!) Yuss. Make him fall in love with that gay roommate guy I forgot his name...but he's like a triplet or something and he's Levi's roommate and he sounded hot and he's fun. D

Do you like Levi’s dad? Yuss, he be very niceful.

Who should go to whose house/cottage over the summer? Dolly should go over Levi's D

I talk too much -.-;;

Poor Dolly... you're evil to him! “I have known you were a boy’s boy for years, Levi." Aw, that's so CUTE! A boy's boy... aw! "I could count every one of his ribs by touch alone." That's so sadly prettyful... I want Dolly! Damn gay fantasy character. And poor poor Levi's wings! Aw! I want him to get better, and Dolly to get better, and them to kiss, and everything to be happy! *sigh* But that's not going to happen, is it? You better update soon!

aww, how cute. ) Father/son moment. Yay.

Everybody isn't a way better writer than you, silly! You rock! Now, as for this chapter... *bursts into tears* (Before I bawl about it, the Levi Spaz really cracked me up.) WHAT THE HELL DOES SHE MEAN HE'S GOING TO KILL HIMSELF? NO NO NO NO NO! (Sorry. Okay. I'm okay.) Poor Levi's wings... but, my gosh, he can't die! No, please, no! If you don't update RIGHT NOW i'll go CRAZY. Oh my gosh, what a twist... *sniff* Please let him be okay...