|Reviews for liquor flasks brimming arsenic|
| clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
babe, your last line is amazing. i love the "bitch" thrown in there so casually that it's like a slap in the face. love the she's counting fireflies... nice southern detail. really like "brisk moment of hydration", but i don't think it needs to be in parentheses.
i miss you girly, what have you been doing with yourself?
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
So cold and yet bitterly passionate, reluctant and revealing.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
"would never expect to see him spanking a bitch at the whorehouse with vodka leaking from his skin." Made me laugh and made me depressed. Lovely, lovely.
Love the sardonic tones, the bitterness. Wonderful job.
| in tesseraction chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
words fail me.
i adore how you shuffled parts ii and i -
| lackluster chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
it's a much 'cleaner' style than your usual, not as many paranthesis, dashes, highlighting, lowlighting.
(the) attention: it all goes to the words. i love that.
| MadBrilliant chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
that last section, i, kinda bothers me. with all those & symbols and the dashes between beauty of the two. but whatever. of course great imagery. like the way you join those phrases in the first part.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Good, excellent, a still moment painting of the era. "Vodka leaking from his skin." "A brisk moment of hydration." I like it.
| HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
this was nice. not your best, but it was good anyways. job
| addie pray chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
This was so amazing and compelling and powerful and beautiful and lovely and delicate and I'm rambling. Wonderful.
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
The imagery is fantastic. I really liked this one. Very nice.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
honesly, you make the most Cinderella-esque scenes paint out so pretty. as always, I can never with stand from loving your work and this is no exception. I giggled like a little girl reading this, it is oh so cruel. loved it ,loved it, loved it.
| a headless butterfly chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
reminds me of regency england, somehow. period romances and crap. beautiful lines (okay not beautiful but uh. affecting. hrm. lines) it's kind of brutal (?) but in such a poetic way. love this, especially the rearrangement of the segments.