|Reviews for scene|
| Paige chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
That's really true...I like it a lot. It totally reflects a lot of our youth in this day and age.
| rusted Wings chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
"sometimes i put
in my mouth
and pray for someone
to kiss me"-i loved this.
i can feel your anger; it's screams out at me. it just COLLIDED. amazing.
i fell in love :)
adding to favorites.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
i love it, its bitter resentful chewed up and spat out imagery. works perfectly. "your photoshopped face still
makes me turn bullimic," did i mention relatable?"you know, sometimes,
my heart stops beating,
and i have to put on
more mascara" very relatable. love it, wicked work.
| DrownASiren chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Wow. Blunt, angry, and stunning. You broke down the scene and assaulted it, in a clever way. Amazing. Makes me want to rock out in my skin tight jeans and smash my dick to obscurity ;)
| account not in use chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
holy fuck. that was amazing. you convey that so well. 'your photoshopped face still/makes me turn bullimic' wow. that is powerful. it seems to crash agianst everything. 'you have no idea that/sometimes i put/razor blades/in my mouth/and pray for someone/to kiss me'-bravo!
| HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
wow. not alot of ppl pull off anger well. i liked it alot. this is going in favs. great work. great imagery and structure.