Reviews for Dirty Little Secret
Written chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
that was bitter, but it ended on a high note. hell yes, laugh at them later! its unfortunate that our secrets are taken advantage of.
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
nice ending. very nice. amazing poem, so much attitude. some people forgoe attitude for rhyme, but you don'e and it's SO GOD!
Plinky chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Lovely poem. Nice beginning.

Nice emotion as well.

Lovely poem - lovely voice to it.

Keep writing!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Oh man, that was awesome!

Pst! I'll laugh with you.

Yeah, sometimes I think it's just better to keep things to myself. Even the most trustworthy can turn on you. But hopefully you know, that you CAN trust me. I would never do that.
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Aw, I hate when good kids get picked on. :( It's not fair - the good ones always die young. Probably because things, like things listed in your poem, get to their heads. Poor good kids :(

Really nice poem, although sad..(not sure if it's meant to be sad, it might just be how I interpreted it..*cough*)

-freak from the corner
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
This rocks, great job!
Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
i really like this one and i think i know what it's about...