Reviews for One Girl, and Another
Savetheplanet chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
This poem was good, I think that you have a lot to learn as a writer (as do I) but the points of your poems are perfect and so heartwarming and well thought-out. Good jobSavetheplanet _
relying on youth chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
If only we were like that...
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
all of us girls - and guys - should read this. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!
Evaa Moffat chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
if only every girl believed this was true. it so is! great work

evaa
destinee ariarti chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
how true, how true

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Chelseamuffin chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Aw, so cute .
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
I love this. So true. I wish all of us girls could realize that :).
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Awesome message - we girls are so self-conscious and way too concerned about image. Guys aren't attracted to insecurity - so we need to be ourselves! Great poem - and written very well! -
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
i love the message in this just be yourself good work

keep writing!