Reviews for Dragon Lore: Beginnings
fanfictionworm chapter 24 . 3/13/2015
If my memory is correct, last time i heard from the author she said that she couldn't access her account. I remember she made a different account and started to continue it but now I'm trying to look for that other account it doesnt seem to exist any more... :(
Chi chapter 24 . 2/16/2014
This is truly a fabulous story. I've enjoyed every single chapter, watching all of your characters grow and interact with each other. I've laughed and I've pitied and I've eagerly awaited each new twist and turn in the journey. I'm sad to see that it's ended at Chapter 22 and not been updated in years, but I've enjoyed what has been published here nonetheless.

I hope one day that you may continue it, or maybe even publish this story. I would certainly buy the book!

Thank you for all that you've written so far.
FantasyReader15 chapter 15 . 10/28/2011



Grammatical errors, here and there. Not too much of a problem. Good use of detail. Explanation of plot is revealed to a certain degree - a good way for cliffhangers. :D
FantasyReader15 chapter 8 . 10/19/2011
I love how this is coming together. ;D

Bane and Tony is going to come together soon!
FantasyReader15 chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
I'll say this as truthfully as I can.

I almost exploded from sheer joy of reading 2 chapters.

This has been... the first time that happened...


Anyways, I love your story! Continue writing please! :)
kingdomfantasyanime453 chapter 24 . 2/8/2008
Really good story...

please update soon...

i hope toni will be alright... this is really a good story

merrymowmow chapter 24 . 12/2/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Susurrent Threnody chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I just had a "Lion King" moment. " 'Simba, everything the light touches is our kingdom.' Well, what about that shadowy place?' 'It's too dangerous. You must never go there, Simba.' " The bit at the end of this chapter was a tad too much like it, it sounded like you lifted the movie script and adapted it.

Other than that, I like the story.
Enaid chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
this is so good and im only on the second chapter! tony amuses me to no end. she's crazy lol. hmm atari seems to like her as well. anywhoo im off to read more. oh and if u ever need a new idea for a story... the first paragraph in the first chap were u mention the lores her mom would tell her sound rather interesting. i wouldnt mind reading bout those

shawn9603 chapter 20 . 10/11/2007
Excellent story. It grabbed me from the very beginning and hung on. Eagerly awaiting updates.
nightdragon0 chapter 24 . 9/30/2007
I guess Echidna could see Toni needed to talk things over for the moment. Toni definitely seemed to be hurt by Clementine's words in more ways than one.

Nice to see that the little unicorn can do something, heh.

I take it from Bane's conversation that he doesn't have much of a liking for Rahu. His personality makes it seem like he's more lax, rather than the other three, who are quite protective of Toni.
the last word 2 chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
I LOVE THIS STORY! when is there going to be more bane and toni romance? update son!
aoi-suzaku17 chapter 17 . 6/12/2007
OMG~ Please please update soon! Im usually a very impatient person, but I'm trying to BE PATIENT because I think your story is worth the wait...I just hope you havent abandoned this! I really really really wanna know the story behind Toni and her mom. PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!
merrymowmow chapter 23 . 6/1/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Lyn-san chapter 23 . 5/28/2007
Oh. My. Goodness! Wow. I've been searching for a really good, outstanding dragon story to read, and I've finally found it! Yay! Your story is so good, I've told my friends about it, and it's kept me from studying for my exams. XD

I can't even say I have A favourite character, because I love them all. Please do continue to keep up the good work.

Oh, and before I forget, can I add your story to my C2 community? It would truly be an honour.

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