If my memory is correct, last time i heard from the author she said that she couldn't access her account. I remember she made a different account and started to continue it but now I'm trying to look for that other account it doesnt seem to exist any more... :(

This is truly a fabulous story. I've enjoyed every single chapter, watching all of your characters grow and interact with each other. I've laughed and I've pitied and I've eagerly awaited each new twist and turn in the journey. I'm sad to see that it's ended at Chapter 22 and not been updated in years, but I've enjoyed what has been published here nonetheless.

I hope one day that you may continue it, or maybe even publish this story. I would certainly buy the book!

Thank you for all that you've written so far.

:O

AWESOMEE.

-enjoying-

Grammatical errors, here and there. Not too much of a problem. Good use of detail. Explanation of plot is revealed to a certain degree - a good way for cliffhangers. :D

I love how this is coming together. ;D

Bane and Tony is going to come together soon!

I'll say this as truthfully as I can.

I almost exploded from sheer joy of reading 2 chapters.

This has been... the first time that happened...

o_o

Anyways, I love your story! Continue writing please! :)

Really good story...

please update soon...

i hope toni will be alright... this is really a good story

UPDATE!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

I just had a "Lion King" moment. " 'Simba, everything the light touches is our kingdom.' Well, what about that shadowy place?' 'It's too dangerous. You must never go there, Simba.' " The bit at the end of this chapter was a tad too much like it, it sounded like you lifted the movie script and adapted it.

Other than that, I like the story.

this is so good and im only on the second chapter! tony amuses me to no end. she's crazy lol. hmm atari seems to like her as well. anywhoo im off to read more. oh and if u ever need a new idea for a story... the first paragraph in the first chap were u mention the lores her mom would tell her sound rather interesting. i wouldnt mind reading bout those

adios4now

Excellent story. It grabbed me from the very beginning and hung on. Eagerly awaiting updates.

I guess Echidna could see Toni needed to talk things over for the moment. Toni definitely seemed to be hurt by Clementine's words in more ways than one.

Nice to see that the little unicorn can do something, heh.

I take it from Bane's conversation that he doesn't have much of a liking for Rahu. His personality makes it seem like he's more lax, rather than the other three, who are quite protective of Toni.

I LOVE THIS STORY! when is there going to be more bane and toni romance? update son!

OMG~ Please please update soon! Im usually a very impatient person, but I'm trying to BE PATIENT because I think your story is worth the wait...I just hope you havent abandoned this! I really really really wanna know the story behind Toni and her mom. PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Oh. My. Goodness! Wow. I've been searching for a really good, outstanding dragon story to read, and I've finally found it! Yay! Your story is so good, I've told my friends about it, and it's kept me from studying for my exams. XD

I can't even say I have A favourite character, because I love them all. Please do continue to keep up the good work.

Oh, and before I forget, can I add your story to my C2 community? It would truly be an honour.

Lyn-san.