Excellent story, I love it so far, still reading the other chapters though, but I'm hooked, keep it up

OMG! i haven't read this in the longest time! OMG though! i still love it completely! dragons rock my socks! i can't wait for more! :D UPDATE ASAP!

Again Awesome Story! I'm sorry i haven't had time to read your story but i'm back and i can't wait to finish it. Kudos! You are such a great author! Oh and another thing. Don't worry about that aferdeity person on bit cause she either really sucks and hates it or has serious issues. She did this to another author too for no apparent reason. Plus she can't even spell 'genius' and claims she's one. Authors like you rock and i love to read a great story so update!Cheers!Starox.

I'm so happy that you updated... I'm with Tony I couldn't eat meat for two days... I would go find fruit or something else...

Anyway just wanted to tell you get chapter... And That I can't wait until to see what happens in the next chapter...

Keep up the good work... _

I really don't know you and all, but i have to say, I'm really proud of you, for obviously being the bigger and better person, and saying you know what? fighting is stupid, and your allowed to have your opinion. It's writers like you who actually make it worth it to read fiction here and know that the world isn't entirely made up of obnoxious snobs. She's obvioulsy just someone whose got a fly up her ass, and thrives of spreading the obnoxious karma. Hey, i know thats not nice, but neither is saying crude things entirely unprovoked. So, in conclusion, YAY YOU! BRAVA! ENCORE! ETC!... and i do love the story. in all honesty, I was a little bit worried with Tony being so young, only 15. Not that i should talk, being as young as I am, and i'm still tryin to figure out the mature rating. Is it because of the gore? whatever it is, i can't wait to see what direction it goes in. update soon! and I'm sorry that there are people out there whose purpose it is to bring people down. But i'm so happy your above all of that.

fuck you even more. I don't give a fuck if you weren't reviewing my story cause I wouldn't want any untalented jerks reviewing. my freind isn't the bane problem the problem is you gave you give your HIPERACTIVE teenager tony a retarded name p.s your summary sucks too go to fucking hell

Your story sound ok and I woul read it if it wasn't for this reason how does one go from Bane a moon dragon whitch sound really cool to Tony a hyperactive teenager what is wrong with you TONY what a dumb name is he a a tiger that is obsessed with cereal or something seriously get a new name I am ahamed that a story with the name bane wihich is the pen name of my best freind is with a dumb as HIPERACTIVE teennager fuck off and die

...interesting...the white dragon dude does sound like a defector...even his nmae is suspicious...

UPDATE! :3

OH i love this! Really juicy and Real. I think Bane is just HOT! Keep writing. Technically that doesn't matter since i'm only at the second chapter but keep going!CheersStarox

OH! i love this story/chapter! It reminds me so much of the other dragon stories i've read. Oh and she's African-American (right?). I've never seen that; its really original. I like Bane, he reminds me of Numair in 'Daine'; slightly secretive and yet open enough to be lovable. Is this a Bane/Tony story ? She seems really young...thirteen or lower maybe. But you said (typed. lol) that she was a teenager so i'd say thirteen. What did that last part mean : "Retribution"? Not the word but the significance of it. Oh and i love your names. I actually found myself wondering what 'nolithi' meant; like it was a language i should know. Nehoot...hm...well there were a few typos but i won't harp on those 'cause i'm sure you can deal with them in your own good time. I also like the fact that your language remained steady; no sudden shifts into 21st century lingo. That was really good and added a lot to the wealth of your story...well this chapter. Nehow keep writing/typing. Cheers!Starox

Quite a series of events. Seems that the real journey of the group is beginning.

Hm, despite being ambushed, I'd think the palace troops would've put up a bit better of a fight, considering how well trained they're supposed to be.I guess they're all scattered around for now..

OMFG! UPDATE! It's getting SO GOOD! btw...is the spy by any chance...Atari?...

wow, omfg is this absolutly amazing! O.O I love this story, pleeasse keep on writing! I'll give you a cookie!

Birdy! *tackles you* XD I'm reviewing! Can you believe it? I actually finished your hell-of-a-long chapter! _ hehehehehe j/k. I liked it lots. Really I did! ...You don't believe me, do you? :PBut seriously...it was REALLY lo0o0o0o0o0o0ng. How many pages is it? 12? 13? ; Cut it down to 6 or 5, k?And I'd like to point something out:Commander Ramous LutusandRamous Degir? Are they the same person?Anyway, I like Bane a lot. You have to draw him out sometime. Tony seems cute (and at times, she reminds me of someone I know too well lol) So...I shall read your second chapter...this weekend. K, byebye!

P.S. Chaos and Ruin are my muses on here. They do my dirty work for me. Chaos is just taking a day off.

that was great! :3UPDATE!