Reviews for Scared Young Sir
Rachelle You Bitch chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
hoy hoy. me likes. and i'm sure some others in poseidon will like as well. however, there are too many conservative-like pussies in there, so unfortunately i don't think you should submit this one.

but damn christian, you can write XD

hasta luego
xHannahx chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
i really like this, the stanzas that dont have "Sacred Young Sir" in the first line stand out and have much more impact, which is clever. well done.

Han.
Marie chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
you sure do write alot of poems xD thats okay. I thought this was very well written and you should keep on doing it! ;D uh... I'm never really good at leaving reviews.. heh.. ah well basically, you have a good way of expressing your feelings. ...that sounded so corny. lol
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
I like this. Well written and I don't know what else to say but it could make a good song. Oh and by the way I like the quote used in the summary but Stalin actually said it. Manson just quoted him in the fight song. Mhm keep writing :D