|Reviews for My Heart Rate|
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
In the spotlight...
| Cheyenne Kai chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
It has a good pace and rhythem, though the last two lines of the third stanza don't seem to go with it somehow... Anyway, I like this. I like the words you have used in your description.