Reviews for Untitled3
darkmetalgoddess chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I like it dark. Great work
Keihno chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
I LOVE this one. LOVE.
bjw chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
WOW. This is brilliant! Your rhyming is just SPLENDIFEROUS! [LOL don't you adore made-up words? I do! Hehehe] I love the subtle comparison between the body and the house - the way it fits so startlingly for both objects just strikes a chord with the reader [me!P]. It's amazing how you put such meaning in a few lines! This is a great poem, I'm going to look at more of your work!
vague shadow chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Very nice! I really enjoyed reading this. The flow was wonderful, the images were clear, the meaning very easy to grasp. Great job.

And as for a title, if I can make a suggestion? "The Body".

CR

P.S I really like your pen name. It's pretty. _