Reviews for Fog
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Wow, every bit is strong and eloquent, and the end is the real clincher. Very lovely.
bjw chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Whoa! This is really really good! It gives a whole new mystical feel to fog - I'd never thought of fog as enchanting before! Love these lines, "with the coming of fog/that clouds reason/and opens eyes." I especially enjoyed that play on "clouds"... Your descriptions are so sweetly enticing. It's very lovely writing!:)
Laura Keil chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
A thorough reflection on fog, what can I say. I especially like the last stanza.