Reviews for Unconditional
Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I'm inspired. Both by your poem and your author's note. The 'regular-font' words came to me as a person realizing what's about/around them and their inner-heart telling them what things meant to them.

you mentioned that this poem was a "sort-of-cyle" of sin and forgiveness. It makes sense, from the order of words.

I believe, it's inspired me to write once again and get out of my hiatus mode.

I'm glad I found this piece. Even more that you wrote it.

-Jez-
Getuie chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
*applauds* yay for non-structure! ;-)

No, this was really good. I can see what you mean with the italicized words. Sometimes it was also kind of the inward response... if that makes sense to you.

And the flow makes sense. Good!
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Awesome! I really like this style! I've seen poems 'like' it, but this one is especially beautiful, because it is so true! You did a wonderful job portraying the grace of God - and I thought it was cool how you made "unconditional" stand out. So true... God is so amazing! -