|Reviews for Unconditional|
| Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I'm inspired. Both by your poem and your author's note. The 'regular-font' words came to me as a person realizing what's about/around them and their inner-heart telling them what things meant to them.
you mentioned that this poem was a "sort-of-cyle" of sin and forgiveness. It makes sense, from the order of words.
I believe, it's inspired me to write once again and get out of my hiatus mode.
I'm glad I found this piece. Even more that you wrote it.
| Getuie chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
*applauds* yay for non-structure! ;-)
No, this was really good. I can see what you mean with the italicized words. Sometimes it was also kind of the inward response... if that makes sense to you.
And the flow makes sense. Good!
| maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Awesome! I really like this style! I've seen poems 'like' it, but this one is especially beautiful, because it is so true! You did a wonderful job portraying the grace of God - and I thought it was cool how you made "unconditional" stand out. So true... God is so amazing! -