Reviews for Dying In Your Poison
eraced chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
such darkness, such pain, such sadness, such beauty. this is really beautiful and there is lots of sorrow. i really like the swords of words and the darkened blue eyes, but it's all great. keep writing.

bleeding heart. erAced
Hell's first Icicle chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
"I've lost the battle" all your poems are so devoid of hope! lighten up, girl! . soz. random urge. this poem... "Your swords of words/Slash out at me" relli emotional, beautiful. okz...i think mi reviews are getting relli monotonous now, but i had to leave SOMETHING after reading these poems!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
wow... powerful and beautiful.. great job
Grace Maxwell chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
Harsh.. Beautifully written though. Dying in your poision to Your swords of words.. All very nice. Ja Ne.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
This is powerful, especially in the last line. Good piece.

queenvixta chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
This is very beautiful and very well written. I can relate to a lot of it. Great work! QueenVixta
CielNombreUnDeesse chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
love it