Was that the ending? I really liked it wish there was more

I just read one chapter and im hooked ive been looking for a story loke this since forever

I loved the story...I wish new stories come soon...

Sorry, but this story just ain't for me. I don't like it when their's more than one romance in the same story. It get's confusing, and it bothers me how one person says that his girlfreind or that her boyfreind is the handsomest or prettiest then someone else goes and says the same thing about their lover. I just don't like it. Theirs one main, MAIN character and you follow their life and their thoughts and occasionally someone else's thoughts. It just bothers me when their's more than one romance in the same story. Well bye.

I had thought that the person teaching Opal how to swim was Leon. Guess there's a different character here! Who is Tristan? Is he a human or a demon?

I think this story is pretty good. But there's quite a lot of grammar mistakes which affects the readers' enjoyment of the story. Just correct the mistakes and your story will be much better!

You've got a good plot going on and the concept works, but you lack basic detail. It's mostly dialog. This reads more like a script than a novel. And it kind of seems like you're rushing the story line. It's your baby, take you're time with her. And you may want to rework the 2nd chapter I was getting confuse when you kept jumping from Leon to Opal.

Hehe lovin the story!

Ali

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I love this story!

Eh mee too. hrm well this chapter was a bit slow...

I'm a bit lost in this story - I started reading it last summer (I think) but didn't drop a review off at the time and can't remember which was the last chapter that I read.

I like your idea of having part human part animal demons. I'm sure that all the furries out there would love to be able to be one of your characters!

I'm sure I read last summer that you don't write as often as you should due to devoting your time to an mmo, mind if I ask which one?

I'll try to start rereading this story, get back into the flow of it at some point soon, just wanted to let you know that I'm here and, once upon a time, I did read it :p

pssh college! I know how you feel anyways I have midterms today its about 5 in the morning! lol.

nice chapter.

It's been so long i had to re-read the past few chappies D

I will definitely pick up that book. I have been looking for a good romance for SO LONG! It's not my fault that i read the entire romance/adult section in my public library 4 years ago P

If you would like any suggestions on the other hand i would suggest any judith mcnaught novel. She's my favorite author!

i liked this chapter, it was short and sweet (ignore the cleche) and yes i do get email alerts when i update.

LOVE YOUR STORY! So cute!

Best part is .. .. it's two romance stories in ONE!

And ya when i update i get e-mail alerts when i update. Whenever i see the sender i get false hope that it's a review or something.