Reviews for On My Knees
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
This is the best poem I have read on this website.
The Watched chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
That's so bitter and cynical and brilliant. Wow. So short and so perfect. Loved it.
NaiRomajin chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Jawesome-ness. XD
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
You hit, and you hit hard. Awesome.
addie pray chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Delightful. I'm not easily shocked or stunned in that sardonic way, but the last line was marvelous marvelous marvelous. Thrice marvelous, and most likely thrice misspelled.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
interesting situation~~ thought provoking~ good work

keep writing!
hey maria chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
So bitter and sarcastic. Adore the last three lines, they made me laugh out loud.
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Hmm... it's obscure, although very well written. Huh. I can't understand it. At least not to a point where I'm completely sure what it's about and can word it correctly. But the poem sure as hell sounds good. LoL.
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Ooh, love the sarcasm in this. Very, very nice. I loved it.