amazingly well written. Funny, too!

WoW! This story is wicked cool!

It's actually amazing! Like, not even kidding, dude!

Please update soon!

Oh. Right. Some cartoons...lets see...

Bugs Bunny, The Flinstones, The Jetsons, Tom And Jerry, Woody Woodpecker, ohh what's the ones with the superheroes called? You know, like Superman, and that Wonder Woman person whatever.

Anyways, yeah. Pro story. Update soon!

i fricking love this story, ur characters are so great, and i love reading every moment of ur stories. please update soon. this is one of my top favs here on fiction press. wah the suspense is killing me.

I want to say cute, but that doesn't really describe your story...I'm gonna go with um...nice. Yeah. It's nice.

wahahahaah loved it!

~silent

ahahah so far i love this story! midget transvestite clowns should be in every story...but of course.

~silent

Definately one of my favorites.

Now I know why many people make you number one on their favorites lists...

really REALLY funny story. just hilarious! Cody is the cutest. lol

other than that they really have some personalities it's nice. update soon .

OK, the questions come first:

1) Is it an end? 'Cause it doesn't seen like it is, lol. I mean, I though you were going to explain what happen next, because they just kissed, we don't even know how they'll get along after that.

2) If it ISN'T an end, so you'll keep updating, right?

[You can answer me by e-mail, btw.]

Anyway, this is EASILY one of the bests stories I've ever read here on fictionpress. I'm fucking in love with you characters, really! And you have a great sense of humor. Though comedy is not the GENERAL idea, it's obviously a great element on the story.

And this is kinda HOT too, lol. I think Robbie makes me feel too much like him. And what was that chapter, ham? THAT'S what I call birthday. I mean, Robbie and Clay are too cute, man.

Dani and Brandy are so sweet too, aren't they? (Ok, maybe 'sweet' isn't the right word, but you got it.)

I love them all. Include all the parents.

So, yeah, update soon. Please? I'm on my knees and I love you.

P.S.: sorry for the bad English, this isn't my first language.

i loved it, is it over? This whole story made me giggle and got me in a good mood, you kick ass!

Whatever happened to this story? It isn't over as far as I can tell... Right? Cause this one time I complained about the next chapter and the author had to (awkwardly) inform me that there wouldn't be another chapter since the story was actually over. . . I was stupid enough not to be able to see the big

'THE END' there... heheh.

Anyway, so I know there's another chapter (the Wiggles) after this but I've already commented long long ago.. I'm back because I decided to read it again.. really big cliff hanger at the end. I've heard of suspense but... when was the last time you updated? I don't even know.. I'm sure I read this for the first long after you wrote it too...

What I'm saying is if you REALLY love us, like it says at the end of the page for Chapter 11, you'd write the next chapter. Haha. I'm sure many, many people are waiting. ]

PS I miss Clay. [

umm, update! (and if fictionpress deleted them, i had like a million exclamation points)

la-dee-da-dee, Clay and Robbie sleeping in a bag

me likey still!

if only i didn't have testing tomorrow, i would appreciate this much more