|Reviews for Trademarked Smiles|
| B. M. Reed chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
This is really beautiful..and sad too. I don't really think it reflects my poem, however, because mine has an entirely different mood from yours. It may just be the way I was feeling when I wrote it; or the way I feel when I read yours. But, nonetheless, I think you did an awesome job.
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
This has great words. And an interesting rhythm.
The best part: jewels that "everyone has never seen before". Somehow that twist from the common phrase "nobody has ever seen before" just reaches me.
Thank you for checking me out. I like knowing about your works (of art!) now.
| linedstained frameless chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
there is this deep confusioin of this fiction being a teeny bopper thing or this psychological material...Neither way it is still lyrically beautiful and stunning...Just like the person you're writing about...review my works to please..
| breakaway miracle chapter 1 . 10/16/2005