|Reviews for Just the Way You Are Perfectly Imperfect
| desireosiobe chapter 25 . 10/22/2020
Im crying so touching!
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/26/2018
I absolutely am in love with this story! It was filled with so much pain, love and heartfelt moments which I really enjoyed absorbing myself into. I loved how you ended the story; totally perfect! This is definitely one of the best stories I have read here on Fiction Press :)
Thank you for sharing it with us!
| guest chapter 25 . 4/3/2015
Such a wonderful read..
Thank you for sharing your work with us :)
| HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 25 . 12/22/2012
Awww! So freaking cute! It's a very well thought out and written story. Jake and Al are so adorable. Love it!
| brinalovesyouxx chapter 25 . 11/29/2012
Such a beautiful story :) i love it! Keep up the awesome work and i cant wait to read more of your stories :D xx
| Aeris.Lockheart507 chapter 25 . 11/11/2012
This story was amazing and the last chapter was probably one of the best endings I've ever read.. It has the ability to extract raw emotion and that's quite an accomplishment :D I cried (,)
| heal me forever chapter 25 . 8/17/2012
mN DIS IS TRUELY A MASTERPEICE ..I HAD GONE THROUGH ALL SORTS OF EMOTIONS WID D STRY LINE..AT MAKE U hell LOT A WRITER DUDE GOD BLESS U ...I AM READING DIS AFTER 6 YEARS MAN ...I AM SO HAPPY I READ DIS
i always remeber dis ...its like AWESUM (:
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/18/2012
This was a fantastic story! I really loved the development of the characters and their growth and you how you made it so that their personalities didn't change. They stayed true to their character, they had many issues to deal with, but in the end, although they are not all completely resolved, they did have a beautiful ending :D
I especially love how they eventually warmed up to each other, and I think the way you handled their break-up and eventual reconciliation was perfect.
| Alanisaur chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
Got me weak :D
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 6 . 1/1/2012
Oh shit! I know who that's going to be!
In other news, that courtship between the little boy and girl is so sweet! :-)
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 25 . 6/7/2011
LOVED THIS SOO MUCH!
| balloonfista chapter 25 . 1/1/2011
aww, this was fabulous ;)
| Sepulchred chapter 25 . 11/5/2010
Right. So, I was considering not reviewing, because I have some things that aren't very nice to say, but thought that you should know. For improvement's sake.
The storyline was fine. It wasn't brilliant, was a bit strange, and could have been better. The thing that really really annoyed me was that your tenses are really really fucked. You jump from past to present to past perfect to present perfect and it's just really all over the place, which makes it very trying to read.
There must be something special about the story though, because despite hating it, I read the whole damn thing.
And since I'm using 'thing' way too often, I should stop writing now.
| j.c-chic chapter 25 . 10/31/2010
You are so awesome. I don't quite understand why you have so little reviews. Honestly? I felt every emotion that Jake and Al were feeling. I was crying all the way on this emotional rollercoaster ride.
As much as I wanted Al and Jake back together every time they did something bad would have to happen to push the other away, they would end up apologising and it would leave both nowhere. I love how you conveyed this helplessness and this story was very realistic and nothing like the cliche romances on here.
| Jaliy chapter 25 . 8/15/2010
This was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it.