how true, how true. Very nice poem, the acrostic worked out pretty well. Still, it would have been nice to have made it flow a bit more. Great work.

Ally B.

gorgeous. you are so use of words. keep up the amazing work.

write on,Em

i like it )

Very, very nice! You managed to pull off the acrostic well, it all made sense and tied the title in nicely. Well done!q

wow, you live finally posted something wat can i say? brilliance! awesome work

keep writing!

wow, that's so great! it even rhymes. great job with this. _-kwazykandypie AKA KellY Ann-

very interesting thought, but very true all the same.

i've always loved well-written acrostics, and this was just that. Love the theme.

Wow, awesomeness to the extreme. Love this poem a lot. Has an interesting feeling behind it. Keep it up!