| Reviews for Finish Me Off |
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  sparks chapter 15 . 10/4/2006 can't wait for next update! love the suspense. |
| Driew chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 hey. good chapter. i like filler chapters, it means they're not too bogged down by necessary pieces of plot. it was nice. some good scarlet and tristan action. lol. even if it didnt end too well. cant wait for more. D |
 Basketball Barbie chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 Meh, so close! I can't believe Tristan, he's a jerk and don't even get me started on Elric! Great filer chapter and please please please get them outta there! B |
| Destiny Violet chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 OMG that was a horrible cliffhanger! AHH! you must write the next one soon |
| theeighthhouse chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 nah. fillers are a bit boring. i like this. |
| Mac Vicchrilli chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 *screams herself* CRAP! the horrible horrible cliffhangers you leave! You're really good at this you know! *sighs* Update again soon! Your writing is amazing and I love the intensity of the characters in this story. It's amazing! :) |
| LilLaTLuv chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 Hey! I like this chappie! It was a good filler, even if it was just a filler. Now, all you gotta do is update again... But, then again, I'm not all that good at updating myself, so I can't really talk. But I'd really like to read more from you. After all, I don't want you like me. That would just be scary. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 so did elric rape her when he "visited" her in the night or w/e |
| Tenshistar chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 I did like it. I can't wait for the next one. Cliffies are the devil's own, aren't they? |
| TinuvielDork chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 Oh, okay. I see. English, creative writing...we just aren't important enough for you anymore. *sniff* No, I'm fine with it. tee, just joking. I actually do understand. It's alright, don't feel guilty. I mean, yes, DO feel guilty for ending us with such an awful ending to a chapter, when you say you might not be able to write in a bit, but... Mm, I think Father Dunne's worse than Elric! All bushy-eyebrowed, blue-veined, and evil. creepy, much? But just to clarify - they think Scarlett/Maeve's a witch because Elric heard her saying something about getting back to their own time, right? Oh, and, psh, stupid Tristan, not to go after her when she runs away! But they're getting back in the next chapter? Well, that should put a nice little crick in their relationship - not being the only two who have an idea what's going on again. And having other people thrown into the mix. Although, I must say, I kind of like Tristan better back in medieval times...but that's okay. One thing I noticed - when Scarlett and Tristan were having their little row, you wrote ""You're not a whore, Scarlett," Tristan grounded out..." Should that have been simply "ground out"? Geez, this is long. Sorry, I'm finally going now...you can stop that snoring... Much love...TinuvielDork |
| Dixie shiloh chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 Good filler. There are some grammatical errors, and a few sentences that seemed like there were words missing from them, but on the whole it was update soon. I want to see what happens when they get back. |
| kbxyz912345 chapter 15 . 10/3/2006 Ooh, you have a very good knack for leaving us all hanging. Absolutely fabulous, of course, and I don't mind if its a filler chapter. Don't worry about writer's blocks-I know exactly how you feel now. School's really busy and you don't always have the energy to write. I'm having a terrible writer's block myself...I'm in the same boat. Anyway, fantastic job! |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 14 . 9/23/2006 oo ma cherie i love this story |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 1 . 9/23/2006 oui |
| Dixie shiloh chapter 14 . 9/22/2006 i really like where this is going. im interested in seeing what happens next so please update i like all the descriptions Dixe Shiloh |