Reviews for Finish Me Off |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I am absolutely fascinated with Ireland as well, but unfortunately there aren't many books on it. Tamora Pierce is good, not Ireland, but awesome nonetheless..and O.R. Melling is amazing. Her Hunter's Moon I adore - it's what got me started in on Ireland in the first place. Anyway, I look forward to reading this awesome story! xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting story! I can't wait to read more! Hope you update very soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i just read all of it so far and its great! i was totally shocked when they ended up in the middle ages, but im glad they got back! Tristans rambling was funny & cute, can't wait for the wedding! great job and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sewing. Hell, I'd kill myself first. :P Great fic so far! My only constructive comment would be that you have a tendency to go on long explanations of backstory and description. It can get a bit tedious...sometimes you can just let information come out as the story goes along, in dialogue and such. You don't have to give us a full geneology or detailed phyiscal description down to the last detail. ;) But it's awesome, great concept. Reading on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins* That was cute. |
![]() ![]() Very nice come back! This chapter was VERY nice, and I love that bit with the airplane. Did you read those books I recommended to you? Meh, I may as well tell you again, just in case. Be warned though, it may get just a tad smutty in a few spots. Love scenes and the like, you know how it is. Nora Roberts is the author, and I highly recommend her. Especcially her trilogies (Key of Light/Knowledge/Valor, Born in Fire/Ice/Shame, Jewels of the Sun/Tears of the Moon/Heart of the Sea, Dance Upon the Air/Heaven and Earth/Face the Fire) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! that was so sweet! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Question: Where are you from? Ireland? USA? just go give me some perspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *big breath in* WOW... I'm head over heels for Tristan and this story.. Hehe I can't believe I'm OMG over it, but .. OMG ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Lol. As usual,I loved this chapter. Kinda confused about how the time travelling plays a part in the over-all plot, but i agree that you shouldn't get rid of it because it was all really well written. Can't wait for the next chapters!;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad u finally updated! I really liked this chapter especially the end. It was really sweet. Tristan is so cute! I look forward to more of Tristian & Scarlett! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! FINALLY! TRISTAN AND SCARLETT FOREVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahah Tristan's afraid of planes. Will there be a confrontation with Brian in the next chapter? Somehow I think it's kind of inevitable, but i'm just curious. Tristan better punch the hell out of him *nods* Great chapter though, and update again soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Its so sweet chapter. Wow Scarlett & Tristan finally back in modern times. They are on the plane to america for wedding. I wonder if Scarlett & Tristan will became boyfriend and girlfriend later on or in america holiday? Hurry update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! What a sweet chapter! I love how this story is turning out! |
![]() ![]() Yay! She's back! This was just wonderful! Just so funny and perfect the way you worked the whole returning thing out! I was scared that you were to discouraged to continue but you pulled through it! Wow, it was phenomenal! I feel so guilty now...it seems that everyone is updating except me! Thanks. |