|Reviews for 17936: Kaitlyn|
| ravenurse chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Freaking strange story, who killed her? And what's up with the notes, and the comatose cat who got squashed? I did like it though.
| msdewey chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Okay - I don't get the "bar?" scene, but other than that this is a tidy little story. There are a lot of things left unsaid and way many questions that could be asked, but for a bleak, sad story this certainly packs a punch. The daily notes to the teacher leave open way many possibilities. The only problem I see is the spelling error (I think) "and he took a handful off her butt to bring her closer." Do you mean "of"? I'd be MOST interested in the significance of the number, of course, but you will have to decide if you want to share that tidbit. Nice work!
| kelsi bones chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Wow. The emotion and descriptions are good, but to be honest Shion, I'm not sure I really understand this. Katie killed three people, then she died... did the cat do it? Sorry, but you know how slow I can be...