Reviews for I Love You
Audwin chapter 4 . 10/28/2005
I like the first poem especially... for my own reasons of course. Love is very confusing even though it seems so simple... A very nice little insight;

The poems are all perfectly fine. However, I think it'd be easier to read them if you spaced it out a bit. And maybe reword the content here and there.

Make sure to keep writing,

-Audwin-