|Reviews for one sunday in october, the world took a nap|
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
wow this is really interesting. Not seen anything quite like this. I like the images you've used. The puddles settling, those never returning home, no children dressing as stranger or strangers becoming friends. Fascinating. The tone is really something!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
wow... i love the concept in this poem~~ so very profound~ awesome job