Reviews for one sunday in october, the world took a nap
Jezsh chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
wow this is really interesting. Not seen anything quite like this. I like the images you've used. The puddles settling, those never returning home, no children dressing as stranger or strangers becoming friends. Fascinating. The tone is really something!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
wow... i love the concept in this poem~~ so very profound~ awesome job

keep writing!