Reviews for The Photo Album Of My Life
Written chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
This is . . . wow. I don't know what to say, but this is kind of a painful poem. I like the subtle repetitions like someday, somehow, etc.
fcf chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I wouldn't call this emo, it's too deep for that. Great images and I like the short choppy lines near the end, it really communicates a mood.

I can't get over the images, so prevalent. Well done.
Plinky chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Wow, fantastic poem - I love it.

I love the bit - "Yes let's look happy / so when we're dead and rotting / people can say once upon a time / we seemed to be alive."

So true, I completely agree. Beautifully phrased as well.

"So everyone can see through the lies that dwell deep inside my brilliantly ashen eyes" beautiful.

Lovely poem. You always seem to be able to evoke such emotion through your poems. I love them! Keep writing!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
I hate you...

All of you're poems are so good! So good, that I'm running out of things to say!

Love the whole idea. One line reminded me of a poem I'm writing.

Ok well I'm done. Love ya.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
wow! that was amazingly powerful and so dramatic(good way!) can i have this one for my wall as well?
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
I like this a lot, great work!
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Flesh..blood...rotting...screams..a bit morbidy, but I still love it :D

-freak from the corner