|Reviews for I'm Cold, So, Hold Me|
| Plinky chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Great poem. Lovely allegory. (I'm never sure if I'm using that word right. Hope you know what I mean.)
"But I'm just driving / with nowhere to go / I'm just driving / for a chance to be alone" Lovely repetition. Nice last line.
"Population: Non-existence" Great line.
I love the last stanza too - lovely. Really finishes the poem well. Great poem, flows beautifully. Keep writing!
| WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
I love the second to last stanza. "Welcome to my desolate heart-town...Population: Nonexistent" Etc.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
i love the line 'Love, the perfect murder' it's just so damn true!
| HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
I love this one, great job
| undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Aw, blankets work good too. I love your emoness writing, it's so...emo. *cough* that made no sense but oh well lol
-freak from the corner