Very nice, it was shorter than I expected, but just as good as your first story! Amazing! Logan acutally changing right before my very eyes (so to speak) and you did an awesome job pairing him and Noelle up together, though I thought it was going to be a little more fun than just hooking up at a party, but still, I love the way he actually was able to straighten things out with his family, especially Ryan. I was waiting for that for a long time (or it felt like a long time).

~Awesome job!~

- Moon Rays

i would love it if you made a story with Ella as the female lead and Math as the male lead...

regards from panama..

I really liked the first one, but I'm not so sure about this one, honestly. I wanted to see Logan improve, but it didn't really seem like he did. And he pretty much destroyed everyone else's lives. I'm just not so sure about the plot...

But hey, that's just me. I can't believe you broke up Ral and Ryan, though...

I wonder if the reason why Logan doesn't like Raleigh is because she's so damn self-righteous, naive and acts like she has no flaws and so superior to everyone like she's god's gift to mankind even though she doesn't realize it herself.

The ending was perfect. I'm happy that things are finally turning around for Logan but I've never actually came to like his character or Noelle's for that matter. They were too much of a bastard and a bitch to like. Hell, I even like Hayle a lot better. The character wasn't likeable, someone I couldn't really relate too so that's a minus. But the story was well written and I enjoyed it. I particularly liked the therapy sessions (weird lol) I need to find myself a Ludlow.

I read this ages ago and I have no idea if I ever submitted a review, but I figured I should share my thoughts the second time through. You portrayed Logan to a tee, I thought. With depression and his panic attacks, I was enthralled and really felt for him. Despite the emotional depth and fewer laugh count than most of your other stories, I think this one is my favorite. It felt far more real.

Awesome job on this. I'd love to see more of Logan, but hey. I can always read this story again.

What a great story. Did you ever write the sequel? I be it will be just as great as the other two! By the way: Logan is by far my favorite character!

This story is quite nice. However, I think you can make it more exciting by having a interesting plot.

I rate this story a 90/100

This story was certainly an enjoyable one.

Can I say That I Absolutely LOVED it?

XD

Sarah

Okay, I've read this, AAO, TSWQ and Jesus Christ! I worship the fic-making ground you walk on! BRAVO! Logan and Noelle are so perfect together. I know they're both heartless, but I absolutely love them both. I just wish I could share my Logan-fangirling with someone! And good- Livy and Math are awesome together 8D I really wish you would write about what happened to them. LMAO Neil should be with Ella just for kicks, and Jared totally deserves someone too XD kay.

I LOVE YOUR WORK!

Ok now that that is out of my system, I have to say I greatly admire you and your stories. Especially AAO and EHL. I think I have read both about a dozen times. I strongly suggest that you try to get one or both published. They are simply that good. I have given the link to both stories to my friends and many of the agree (I don't know if they left reviews or not. . .I should go check on that.) I thought that after a dozen or so reads I was long over due to leave a review so here I am leaving one. I wish you the best of luck in you writing career because you are truly gifted.

i love it! my friend let me read your r and i loved it. then i found you here in fictionpress and this fic is better. i love it!

Best story yet

*looks pointedly* You made me cry. I havent cried so much in DAYS! Since I'm already kind of low, and missing school days, and olden and golden school memories, and listening to this song that is making me recollect all those memories, I'm already jumpy and emotional, and you made me cry even more.

Kudos. I love this story more. I think I might love Logan more than Ryan, but I like Raleigh more than I like Noelle. WTH, I love all your characters! :D

I just wised you wrote more... of them.

Noelle and Logan - the perfect couple! Awesome story - I found this one a lot more different from Agaisnt all odds than I thought it would be. I believe this one to be more intense and pensive than Against all odds but, I still loved it! Hmm...I really do hope you make a sequel with Livy in it - and preferably one with Raleigh not being such a bitch since I like her. D All in all, wonderful story! Thank you for writing!