I'm really liking this story.

I read AAO, and it was really cute. Logan was one of my fav characters in that story (even though he was a big jerk) but I always felt he was hurt and misunderstood.

Um... just one little thing. This sentence:

"She promised that more were coming, but for now, everyone dove in." (it's about the middle of this chapter)

dove is grammatically incorrect. It should be dived. but that's all. I really like it :)

to give credit to your friend, I prefer 'Everybody' instead of 'Everyone' - it sounds better.

i think this is your best story. it's witty, deep and in the third person. i LOVE logan and the way you write him is AMAZING!

Gah! Logan smiled! That's so awesome :)

I think I liked EHL better than AAO... you should definitely send off your stories to a publisher.

I loved this story, it had a different twist to it than most stories. And despite Logan's coldness, I still loved him anyway. Logan & Noelle go perfectly together! One of my favorite chapters was 13, it was extremely heartbreaking. I also loved the ending of course, when Logan finally smiled.

Congrats on yet another wonderful story. ]

Aw man. If only this story and AAO is published... TTTT

I liked EHL better though. :) ermm...do you think you could give your AAO and EHL story to a publisher so people can read it?

If you ask me whether I love Logan or not, I LOVE HIM! xD When I read AAO, I mostly hoped he'll appear in every chapter~

i love this story! I was fed up with reading arrogant boy and geeky girl stories.I love your Noelle, do you think you can make a sequel where she goes to college or they both are grown up?

no offence, but i really, really dont like noelle. she really pisses me off just by saying one sentence sometimes. i can understand why ryan cant tolerate her. otherwise, ur story is really good. there are just a few things i dont like. i think it's more of the ideas you put in the story. not exactly that but its hard to explain. its not all my style. some is, some isnt. i dont mean this in an offensive way, just wanted to say since this is a feedback/review.

i dont knoe whats come over me but ill say it anyway

you make me cry for the first time in years. this chapter has got to be the most tear-cracking because i pretty much broke down. I'm not saying that's a bad thing hell no. I loved every bit of it, but to make me CRY is outstanding :D

GJ and loves you muchh

~DenDen

I have no idea if I reviewed AAO, but I'm kind of going to do both AAO and EHL at the same time. I enjoyed reading AAO, but I absolutely fell in love with EHL. Logan is such a dark angsty character, and I love those guys. I love the way you portrayed him, not really knowing where his problem comes from. I definitely loved your dialogue. You made them sound their age! I get really frustrated when teenagers and young adults sound like they're forty or four. I cannot wait to read more from you!

I loved this story from start to finish. It was so well written that it really was a pleasure reading it. First I was not too kicked about Logan, mainly because he's the kind of person who would intimidate the hell out of me but over the course of time I grew to like him. What I enjoyed the most were the conversations with Ludlow. It's like she was helping him figure out who he was without point blank telling him. I also like how you potray Noelle and Logan's relationship . It starts out a little messed up but without a doubt they seem perfect for each other. And then I really liked all the supporting characters, well not so much Raleigh cause she rubbed me the wrong way but Math in particular cause he was so fun. Anyways great job on this and I'm definitely going to be reading all your other work. :)

Okay, I was initially going to review at the end of the story but I just had to review this chapter because it was so fantastic. It was gut-wrenching and it had me in tears because that very scene in the foyer was a family in tatters. And everyone thinks that they have gone wrong somehwere and it all feels so tragic. And the tears wont stop rolling, anyways I'm off to read the next few chapters.

I really really loved this story. Going through all that with Logan even made me cry and of all the stories I've read on Fictionpress, this is the only one that made me cry. It was so sad how he just kept on being misunderstood. I've decided: I'm going to read every one of your stories D I really hope you continue writing because your stories are marvelous!

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And this was another great story. Logan is one of my favorite characters, and Noelle didn't seem as...cold? in this one. :) I wish I'd discovered these stories sooner.

oh how i miss logan, i wish u can write a sequel or anything involves with logan and noelle!