Reviews for Everybody Hates Logan
goneandgone chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
this is the second time around for me reading this story. i just absolutely positively love Logan. I have know clue why i just do. i think it might be the fact that he is filled with disdain for the world. i don't know just felt like sharing that.
music-is-love10 chapter 19 . 2/24/2009
I'm going to be honest with you - it was a really bittersweet ending. It wasn't the fluff that makes everything cheesy but it wasn't sad and depressing. I enjoyed this story from Logan's POV and L&N as a couple is interesting but they are adorable in thier own way. Anyhow, great story. It was interestint to see Raleigh and Ryan from a third person perspective, rather than the emotion you get from being inside people's thoughts and stuff. It was interesting, but I loved it all.

Great Story
Veronica Kimble chapter 19 . 2/21/2009
i'm just so happy ryan and ral got back together. i'm surprised they broke up in the first place. they were so awesome together in against all odds!

i'm luvin your stories! :)
Kina chapter 19 . 2/13/2009
Wow

I loved it. In parts, Logan actually reminds me a lot of one of my brothers and oddly enough I felt as though I just got some insight into his life! I think you've done a wonderful job of writing EHL. And even though I wish I could find out more about Livy/Math through a story focusing on them, I am quite happy the way its turned out and am hoping that you will share with us Ella's story.

All the best!
x34 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
its really nice story..
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
I loved this, it was even better than the the first one! Logan is such a fascinating character, im astounded at how much depth you went into with his character. Hes so unique and definately one of my favourite characters of all time. Logans mind is an amazing place and you are such a great writer for being able to create and write convincingly about a character with Logans mental state. It was really insightful to read about someone like Logan because, probably like most people, i do know and have met people like Logan who can be really nasty sometimes and its just hard to understand why.

Also this story made me like Ryan even more with the development of his relationship with his brothers and i particularly liked Max for all he did with helping Logan. Im glad that Livy and Math got together and i know you said that you werent going to write her story but i think apart from Logan, Livy was the most interesting character to me, especially since we found out that she does therapy which made me all the curious about her and Math was especially loveable. Even so, if your still planning, id love to read a sequel about Ella!
welcome to meganland chapter 19 . 1/31/2009
I loved this, soso much. I loved how Logan and Noelle got together. I liked how there weren't those weird gushy moments and they weren't into all of the romancey beating around the bush, but it was still apparent they they really liked each other. It made me sad everytime one of them blamed themselves. Ryan did it, Logan did, even Alec did sometimes. It was so sad. This was amazing. It was so much more...real then AAO.

I love everything you write :) It has to be fun to be 'famous' on fp.
killer chipmunk chapter 19 . 1/27/2009
ah how cute! I really liked your story. It was really good. I read your other one and I really liked it to.

I kept thinking that you should have put base jumping

in their somewhere but that's probally just my slight

obsession wiht base jumping right now. Lol. It was

awsome
Sel chapter 7 . 1/22/2009
Wow

This is really deep.

So he really is insecure, he's got a inferior brother complex sort of thing huh.

Wow... I love how you ended this chapter... it's really insightful to how Logan thinks.
Mai-lee T chapter 19 . 1/19/2009
Yet another amazing story!

This story actually got me thinking alot... I'mm considering doing the whole apologizing to all the people I've affected badly, and such.

The whole sha-bang was incredible! You really got to see what was wrong with Logan, and how he grew from the beginning.

I think the ending was the best ending I've ever read in any of the story's I've ever read. :)

How did you figure out the whole therapist thing tho? Like, what the therapist says to Logan, all the advice and such. Did you come up with it yourself? Would all those things actually help?

Let me know :)
Sakiru Yume chapter 19 . 1/17/2009
Nice. I really liked the story and I hope that you post the sequel soon. Again, great story.
kaw97 chapter 19 . 1/15/2009
I just read Against All Odds and Everybody Hates Logan back to back. I loved them both, but if I hadn't done it that way, I think I would have said I was disappointed with EHL not being as much a romance as it was a "family angst" story.

Against All Odds had a great mix of fun and silliness, romance and family/personal drama. I really liked that. Everybody Hates Logan was a lot darker and it seemed like he and his family were just sort of "crawling out of the cave into the sunlight" near the end. Maybe that's just more realistic.

Oh, and I forgot to say this on AAO review, but I really liked the bet. It was unique in that the girl was aware of it and both sides were able to strategize.

I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stories.
Ivory-pen chapter 19 . 1/15/2009
Brilliant,

your a fantastic writer.
SRC-SI chapter 19 . 1/14/2009
This story is beyond awesome...

i abso-freakin-lutely love it!

i didnt read the story about Ral and Ryan...this one seemed more interesting...and in case u r wondering i am not planning to read it, i love ur writing and i have nothing against it...but i dont want to merge my opinion of the characters in this story with another one( i love logan and noelle by the way), that and i have gotten tired of the whole falling in love with your brother's best friend cliche...

anyways good job and keep writing!

cant wait 4 more of your work:)
Sha chapter 5 . 1/11/2009
For some reason, Logan's one of my favorite character now. :/ Weird how that works, huh.

And for the record, I love your stories. Every chapter, every sentence, every word. To avoid sounding even more mushy, I'll just stop here. ;D
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