Great story. Did noelle pop logan's cherry at prom?

I really loved this story. It was much better, in my opinion, than Against All Odds. I guess that's also because I prefer the more angst-ridden and nitty-gritty emotions that go with life. This entire story seemed very cathartic and real.

Logan was my favorite in Against All Odds as before, and he remains my favorite now. He's, as I thought before, simply misunderstanding the world's interpretation of himself. You did a very good job taking what the reader knew of his character before - his so-called woman-hater reputation, his constant disagreements with his family, particularly Ryan, and his drinking problems - and expounded on them without seeming too out of the ordinary. I'm glad you added more of Noelle without making her seem like another main character in that Logan did outshine her, but we learned more about her character. I'm glad you introduced the rest of her family, he rmother, father, and stepparents on each side.

The plot was great from the beginning because you jumped right into the important part. It was well-written and perfect.

Five stars! ;)

Bloody Crayon

ohmygosh i really love this story; this chapter! i love how logan is so complex, and theres so much mystery about him. keep it up!

I don't know what to say, I love Logan, and am so happy he is recovering. Great job. :D

Just like AAO this was amazing, and in almost every way different. I like you included some of my previous favorites, and to be honest Logan has always been close to my favorite. Even before EHL. Seeing as it's been a few years I don't know if you will write a sequel. Nor am I suggesting you should. Both stories are good without a third, but then again it would be kind of nice. Ella is very amusing, and I tends to surprise me. Congratulations once again on another lovely piece!

for me this is better than the AAO...so cute i really love loghan

Personally, i think this is your best story. Not that any of the other ones are anywhere near bad, but Logan's story's got it all. I hated Logan like hell (the guy's a certified asshole) but just couldn't stop reading cause there was that possibility he had some good under it all. Then it seemed like he had nothing under anything. But it all worked out and Logan turned out not to be some subhuman life form. If hollywood wasn't so commercial and didn't manage to fuck up every good script, this should be made into a movie.

I finished this story in one day! It was great! I haven't been reading all day but I needed to finish it none the less. I was little surprised with Noelle and Logan at first. But they are so compatiable. My best friend is actually named Noelle, but she's not really anything like the noelle in this story, more like Livy.

I'm glad that Ryan and Ral got back together, really happy. I do hope that Logan gets over all his problems, but it seems that that has already happened. He's dealing with his drinking, which is good, and he's dealing with his family and anger problems. Really good. I give him a gold star, lol.

Livy and Math I think are a great couple, and I also like who you chose for all the characters casting wise. Niel though, I feel bad for him. He's such a sweet guy, so please maybe after Ella, which I'm looking forward to that story, can you write one about Neil? Thank you!

Great Job!

Has A WaywithWords

I think The Art of War is written in Chinese since Sun Tzu was Chinese

so, first things first, love the title, lol!

onto the story now. after reading the entire thing i must say that you're an incredibly talented writer and i thoroughly enjoyed it. Logan was brilliantly executed and while i wasn't the biggest fan of Noelle honestly [idk why, she... she just didn't quite appeal to me, but to each their own i suppose...]

anyway, great job and kudos on a fantastic and COMPLETED fic

My most favorite thing about this story is the title, it's just so perfect. My second favorite thing is that everyone may hate Logan but everyone sure loves this story :P It was amazing, flawless, intense! You have a lot of talent! I absolutely adore how you kept the characters IN character the whole way. Logan may act like a jerk but I still loved him for it. Ryan was adorable in the sequel this time as well. Hmm..what else. Oh yes, my favorite character is Andy, I want a baby brother like him. Haha. Well anyways, even though I can't have an Andy, Logan or Ryan for my own I still enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing with us! :D

I think think your story is pretty good, so take some advice: not all authors are truly authors. Some make their money by copying the ideas of others and just changing the names and some times the setting.

If you don't care if your story gets copied that's all fine and dandy, but I'm almost certain Fictionpress can not protect you unless they copy your story exactly. Be careful. Even copyrights have loop holes.

~CKHS frowns

Aw... I love, love, love Logan! Very (nice, Amazing, SPECTACULAR) story. I must say I don't like Ral anymore, and I liked Logan's story much more. Don't get me wrong, I loved her for the 41 chapters of AAO, but Logan just seems more real. He makes her look a little vapid.

Finally a FP story that is actually realistic; not everyone is happy, perfect or somehow has a model figure and good looks. I'm glad that the whole story wasn't about romance, but rather overcoming life in general. Your story wasn't depressing, it was REAL, and for that you should be very proud.

Thankyou.

ok this chapter made me cry. seriously.