i miss logan and noelle, please write another Henderson story.

Hello!

I couldn't get past the first page of Against All Odds. I don't know what it was, but I just couldn't seem to keep going. Anyway, I know you said we should read that story before this one, but I love Logan! ) I didn't get confused with characters, which just shows how great of an author you are. Thanks for so many great stories that distracted me from my paper. xD

I really liked your depiction of Logan. You made him real and alive, and I believe that this is even better that Against All Odds.

Your writing style is fantastic.

Repeated grammar mistake: "What did you last drink?"

Did you mean "When did you last drink?" perhaps?

That's the only mistake I picked up on. Didn't notice any outstanding spelling errors either which is a bonus. Overall a lovely, creatively written story of a beautiful character.

I want Logan. He's far too good for Noelle. :p

as i was going through some of the comments...i find it odd that a lot of people commented about the r&r breakup. whats the big deal? they'll get back together eventually especially after ral stop being such a bitch. this story is about Logan! not some petty little girl, ppl needs to realize although this is a sequal but its a different story not against all of odds2. i love Logan!

its 6:03 am right now, i just got done reading chapter 13 and i've been crying since chapter 10. omg Logan, wow! i've started reading your story last night and so far i'm still reading but i wanted to leave you a comment to let you know how amazing you are! this is amazing, i really love your characters especially logan, wow! the emotions your portrayed are so deep and raw, omg i'm speechless. your amazing!

awesome story! its definitely one of the better ones i've read on this site! congrats!

Wow, this was a really good story. I never know what to expect when I start reading one of these online things, but you did a really good job telling Logan's story. You have a great talent for showing a truly life-like situation, and how it at least begins to get resolved. It's really entertaining and enlightening to read your stories, thank you for writing!

i liked this a lot.

i knew you weren't heartless. you pretend you don't like the romance, you say you can't stand to give it out in "large increments" or whatever, but when it comes down to it, you want everyone living happily ever after just like the rest of us do.

i got pretty choked up a few chapters ago, to tell the truth. i'm pathetic, i know it. i just adored ryan and logan's brother-bonding chat, though. wonderful.

and raleigh's still awesome, as usual. so is ryan. everyone is just wonderful. i loved this story a lot, despite any rude remarks i might have stated earlier.

you're very popular here, i've noticed. i hope you enjoy that, because some of us aren't so lucky and/or talented. you're a great writer, you know.

i don't know if you've made a sequel. if you have, i can tell you that i can't think of a better candidate for leading lady than ella.

keep up the amazing work.

i think you've changed your mind.

you said before that logan was "a jackass through and through," but that's not the truth.

the truth is, as i suspected, that logan has a heart. you knew he would, or you wouldn't be writing this story. you can't write a romance when the male lead has no heart. he's just incredibly dim, that's all. he's too caught up in his angst to realize that life- at least, logan's life, anyway- is more like a trashy teen romance novel than a teen angst bit. it's got it's downs, for sure, but he'd better live happily ever after.

i think that you, even though you've made your so-called opinion of romance very clear, have a heart, also, and you won't let this story end in angst.

i was actually going to suggest neil/ella. i think it'd be amusing.

i like noelle and logan, though. a lot. my only issue is that raleigh and ryan seem like almost different people. but when i think about it, that might be what you're going for. you know, people are different in other people's eyes. from raleigh's perspective, ryan is the strong-man, the boyfriend, the man-slut.

but to logan... it's his baby brother. he's young, he's eager and overly foolish.

so really. it makes sense when i think about it.

this is good. i especially like the therapist.

but i think it's a little rude, you know, in your author's nots, prattling on about how things should be obvious. i think you're probably a very smart person, which is why i can't blame you for doing this, but i'll bet a lot of stupid people are reading your story, and things like why logan and ryan fight are not obvious to them. i assume you're referring to the fact that ryan's a little pretty-boy golden hero, daddy's little favorite and all, but there's no explanation other than that.

logan may be jealous, i mean, sure, but that's no reason for him to behave that way. sure he's a jackass, but jackasses can also have a bit of a heart, too. a theme that i hope you'll be touching on, or frankly, this story isn't worth my time.

also, you've most definitely noticed this, seeing as you're the author, but ryan seems a practically different character than he was in against all odds. it's cute. i like seeing more of this young, vulnerable side of ryan.

i enjoyed it thus far. i hope it will not disappoint. i assure you, though, that i absolutely adore it when the bitches end up together. it just really makes my day.

this story is so much love. I've now spent my whole evening crying, 'cause of you! Logan is such a likeable unlikeable character.

..uh, yeah, that didn't make sense, sorry. But yeah, wonderfully crafted story, and "real" characters, who all have plenty of faults, and who screw up all the time. But that's what makes reading interesting. Good job!

I have to say, you're an amazing writer. I've read AAO and EHL and the depth to your characters is wonderful, and they seem so real you can almost reach out and touch them :) The characters were great, and I think you paired them really well. Good job :)

Great story. I really loved this one, especially Logan and Noelle. It certainly wasn't sappy. and Livy's great too, and it's nice to see the AAO characters. I loved the plot and ending. Great writing.