Reviews for spinning empty
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
gorgeous and oh so in this poem is perfect.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
lyric and beautiful
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
I love the alliteration.
youzi chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
loved the wordplay in "unseen unheard unsung" and also the line about the " inevitability of a newton's cradle". do keep writing :D
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
the ending is ever so poignant, and the whole poem seems so surreal, accompanied by the beautifully painted imagery.
really chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
we fall out and fall in and dip out of your illusions as you sing us lullabies to sleep.

wow.

i'll wait for the next eternity too!
addie pray chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
This was quite beautiful. I love the cryptic imagery, and it just has this cold-coffee, dusty morning serenity. So well written.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
powerful detail and as always gorgeous imager/diction.

* noelle
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Powerful detail, I loved the story telling in this; how it evolved through each verse. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.