Reviews for spinning empty
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
gorgeous and oh so in this poem is perfect.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
lyric and beautiful
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
I love the alliteration.
youzi chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
loved the wordplay in "unseen unheard unsung" and also the line about the " inevitability of a newton's cradle". do keep writing :D
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
the ending is ever so poignant, and the whole poem seems so surreal, accompanied by the beautifully painted imagery.
really chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
we fall out and fall in and dip out of your illusions as you sing us lullabies to sleep.


i'll wait for the next eternity too!
addie pray chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
This was quite beautiful. I love the cryptic imagery, and it just has this cold-coffee, dusty morning serenity. So well written.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
powerful detail and as always gorgeous imager/diction.

~* noelle
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Powerful detail, I loved the story telling in this; how it evolved through each verse. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.