I really enjoyed this poem, and I really empathised with the descrciption

"The girl behind the smiles,

The petal dangling just."

It exudes vunerability, and something in the tone or the wording of this really hit home, I understand these emotions completely.

I realy like this. I have felt this way at times...

another powerful one. love the part with the flower and the dangling petal

This relates to so many people. I feel like this sometimes too so it's kind of depressing for me to read actually. Keep up writing.

i really liked this. it relates a lot to what i feel sometimes.

update more! (:

Totally relate to it. So yeah. Good work. UPDATE FOREVER YOU DAMMIT!

Did you write this? Wow. It's really good. I love the second-to-last verse.

I wish you'd given a little more information on this new story. But since you didn't...make sure to update soon!

summers-end(formerly known as basicME)

i love this. a petal dangling just. the as if part, while not exactly poetic is kinda touching in a reminiscent 'clueless' way too. P i heart this

it was great I loved the word choice and the repetition of tired. makes everything seem so worn out that your at the brink of nothingness. and you just begging and sick of being so lost... good job! thaks for the review on my poem too!

really sad poem. Loved it!

Great wording, I especially loved where you said "A petal dangling just." Its odd but, idk ... but I really like it ) hope you write more