Call me crazy but I think that'd make a nice song. _ Odd little ol' me started trying to sing it. _;;; As I said call me crazy. Nice poem. This is one I'm gonna remember if I ever become a singer. _

Oh I don't know...I can put a few things to the pilots in that poem. I almost thought it was Duo in a way...

I loved it! I don't know anyother poem that can rivial it!

that was real good.

i really love this poem. its totally something i can relate to with this stupid mood i'm in. its like this torturing feeling that comes and goes as it pleases. i really like your poem. nice usage and choice of words. especially, "salvation comes in no human shape." vedy vedy touching... *_* thanx..

I love it! This poem is not just dark, it is truthful and I understand what you mean. The world needs more writers who tell the truth. Thank you very much.

that was very nice. i liked it.