Reviews for insects
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/28/2006
I love all the color in this. Color is amazing, and to see as much in a piece is incredible. Great job. Keep writing! :)
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
My favorite one yet-beautiful!
Apikalia chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
SO true. high school does need to be colored in and given some life. very well put. i'm so proud of you! gosh. you really are amazing...

i love you, kiley dear.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
hey i think i've read this before and relaly liked it. so once again i'm reading your writing and being pissed off because i suck and you're amazing. striped t-shirts and tank tops over long sleeved shirts you weirdo. :P
born blue chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
kiley, this is awesome awesome awesome. you, my dear, are amazing. take my word for it. i love the descriptions, it makes me feel like.. i don't know. but it creates a perfect picture.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Simple meaning. Very well put. I quite enjoyed this.
girlnheadphones chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
love the form of this. the word choice really brings life to this poem about lifelessness, a really amazing contrast.

please review me back -girlnheadphones
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
I like how profound this is! Very well-worded, and so painfully true. How we long to be ourselves... Thanks for sharing:-) -