Reviews for 8 Words
Typewriter Koinonia chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
I'm Fake Raptor!
foodisgood chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Your last line is very good. The first two, however, make it seem a bit childish... "suck" and "moron". Maybe that was your point, but it just seems like so much better descriptions could have preceded "eggshell house", which is beautiful.