Reviews for Stairs of Light
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Really breathtakingly beautiful. I really liked this poem. It had such a wondrous, air about it and I loved your choice of words especially these ones as openers: 'The parting of eternity, in a dream

The misty dawn sends off a chariot of light

Upon fading clouds and sunlight’s stream

Off into the far distances, out of sight'They set a dreamy wonderful mood, I imagined, chariots riding through clouds, led by winged horses. That is such a beautiful image so thank you, for creating it. You are going on my favorites.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
Ky-Ky Apocalypse chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
wow! That was so emotional and sad!
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Beautiful imagery. And it made me feel kind of...lost - Nice effects!
Kelly I chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Nice job once again. I really like your work.-Kelly I
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
man, that's cool imagery! well done! so well done! that's so very very cool. love it :)
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
WOAH. OMG. *adds to favorites list* is was INCREDIBLE. I have nothing to say. I'm utterly speechless.
FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Wow. That was great. I love the detail and wording in your poems. They're always so deep and simply beautiful. This one was a perfect example. Keep writing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
i really like that last line.. great poem
curiouzkatt chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Existence wandering this broken world

words... simple, short, effective... do you know kamikaze899? she's really good like you... n_n check out her poems if you have time. she's in my fave authors list for shortcut. nyehehehehe.
Sub Form of Human chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
This is pretty good. It flows nice and the rhyme helped it along. Nice imagery.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
wow! i could really see this as a published work!
BellonaFlayreRiver chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
ring of prophecy. word choice fits exactly. lovely. ;)
Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
This is pretty and melodic.
The System Mother chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
A very beautiful poem yourself. Great great work.
WestFullMoon chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Wow, that's really wonderful! It truly painted a picture in my head!
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